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  1. THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 2
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  6. DESIGNER : Toobigofadreamer
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  8. COVER : https://68.media.tumblr.com/123464ea792ad9bdf686896bd889231d/tumblr_ottkff3fN81vp23qno1_540.png
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  15. CRITIQUE FROM @impassively :
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  18. • Things I like: The color scheme and the typography.
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  22. • Things I dislike: The use of texture, pngs, and the composition.
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  26. • For improvement: For composition, I'd really recommend having one focal point and have your models/actresses at
  27. different eye levels and facing different directions if possible. It's hard to tell where to look.
  28. The pngs on the guy's side look like they were just placed there without thought and look a bit pointless.
  29. Try experimenting with placement. The textures prove to look useless, they don't really add anything or make it look better.
  30. If you added topaz, maybe lower it down a bit so the skin isn't too smooth.
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  34. • Score: 7/10
  35. Reason: -1 for focal point, -2 for use of resources
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  43. CRITIQUE FROM @HiItsMeRT :
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  46. • Things I like: I like how you divided the banner into two parts showing two different sides and putting Dylan in the middle.
  47. The color scheme looks good - one side red and the other blue. I love the overall colorful, teenfic vibe you got there.
  48. The font you used goes perfectly with this and putting the word "no" behind the png was also a good choice.
  49. I also like those small pngs of the flower behind dylan and the stationary png you used.
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  53. • Things I dislike: Excessive topaz which makes the faces too blurry.
  54. Overall the banner looks very messy - like everything is scattered everywhere and you dont know where to focus.
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  58. • For improvement: First of all I would suggest you to remove the triangular shaped texture you used on the left which
  59. actually makes thr banner look messy and maybe add some swirls/doodles in its place. Secondly, try lowering the
  60. psd/saturation on the girls, they look burnt. Thirdly, the font color for the word "love" almost vanishes with the
  61. color of the sky, so try using a different color, perhaps red. Lastly, always put your watermark.
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  64. • Score: 8/10
  65. Reason: -2 for disorganization
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