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  1. This CV does have a polished and professional tone, but it indeed feels generic and lacks concrete evidence of specific accomplishments, which might give the impression that it was generated by a tool like ChatGPT. Here's my feedback:
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  3. # Strengths:
  4. 1. Structured and Comprehensive: The CV is well-organized, with clear sections and bullet points summarizing key responsibilities and achievements.
  5. 2. Relevant Skills Highlighted: It mentions crucial skills for a Product Analyst, such as A/B testing, metrics ownership, collaboration, and dashboard creation.
  6. 3. Quantifiable Outcomes: Some metrics, like improving onboarding funnels by 5% and user engagement by 7%, are mentioned, which adds credibility.
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  8. # Weaknesses and Suggestions:
  9. 1. Lack of Specificity in Achievements:
  10. - The CV is filled with general phrases such as "resulting in improved feature adoption and engagement" or "enhanced user experience." It doesn’t explain how these outcomes were achieved or what challenges were addressed.
  11. - Suggestion: Replace vague statements with specific examples. For instance:
  12. - "Implemented product tracking for onboarding, revealing that 40% of drop-offs occurred on Step 3, leading to redesigns that increased completion rates by 15%."
  13. - "A/B tests on the feature X resulted in a statistically significant increase in [specific KPI] by [specific percentage]."
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  15. 2. Repetition of Responsibilities:
  16. - Several bullet points overlap in content, particularly regarding product metrics, tracking events, and collaboration. This reduces the impact of the CV.
  17. - Suggestion: Consolidate overlapping points and focus on unique achievements.
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  19. 3. Unverifiable Metrics:
  20. - The improvements mentioned (5% and 7%) lack context. Without a baseline or comparison, it's unclear how meaningful these increases are.
  21. - Suggestion: Include baselines or the scale of impact, e.g., "improved onboarding funnel success rate from 45% to 50%, impacting over 100,000 users per month."
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  23. 4. Absence of Tools and Technologies:
  24. - No mention of tools or platforms (e.g., SQL, Python, Tableau, Amplitude, or Looker) used to perform these tasks. This is crucial for a Product Analyst role.
  25. - Suggestion: Add specific tools, e.g., "Used SQL to query databases with over 1B rows of user data" or "Built dashboards in Tableau to visualize user retention trends."
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  27. 5. Generalized Collaboration:
  28. - "Collaborated closely with product managers, designers, and engineers" is standard for the role but doesn’t add much value.
  29. - Suggestion: Describe what unique contributions were made in collaboration, e.g., "Worked with designers to refine onboarding UX, resulting in a 10% increase in daily active users."
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  31. # Overall Impression:
  32. The CV reads well but feels like a template rather than a personalized account of the candidate's work. While the role and tasks described align with a Middle Product Analyst position, the lack of specificity and unique contributions may weaken the candidate's credibility.
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  34. Encouraging the candidate to provide:
  35. - Specific project examples and challenges faced.
  36. - Clear impact metrics with baseline/context.
  37. - A list of tools and technologies used.
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  39. This will make the CV much more impactful and aligned with the expectations for a Middle Product Analyst role.
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