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2 | THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 2 | |
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7 | DESIGNER : Toobigofadreamer | |
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9 | COVER : https://68.media.tumblr.com/123464ea792ad9bdf686896bd889231d/tumblr_ottkff3fN81vp23qno1_540.png | |
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16 | CRITIQUE FROM @impassively : | |
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19 | • Things I like: The color scheme and the typography. | |
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23 | • Things I dislike: The use of texture, pngs, and the composition. | |
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27 | • For improvement: For composition, I'd really recommend having one focal point and have your models/actresses at | |
28 | different eye levels and facing different directions if possible. It's hard to tell where to look. | |
29 | The pngs on the guy's side look like they were just placed there without thought and look a bit pointless. | |
30 | Try experimenting with placement. The textures prove to look useless, they don't really add anything or make it look better. | |
31 | If you added topaz, maybe lower it down a bit so the skin isn't too smooth. | |
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35 | • Score: 7/10 | |
36 | Reason: -1 for focal point, -2 for use of resources | |
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44 | CRITIQUE FROM @HiItsMeRT : | |
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47 | • Things I like: I like how you divided the banner into two parts showing two different sides and putting Dylan in the middle. | |
48 | The color scheme looks good - one side red and the other blue. I love the overall colorful, teenfic vibe you got there. | |
49 | - | I also like those small pngs of the flower behind dylan and the stationary png you used. |
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50 | I also like those small pngs of the flower behind dylan and the stationary png you used. | |
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54 | • Things I dislike: Excessive topaz which makes the faces too blurry. | |
55 | Overall the banner looks very messy - like everything is scattered everywhere and you dont know where to focus. | |
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59 | • For improvement: First of all I would suggest you to remove the triangular shaped texture you used on the left which | |
60 | actually makes thr banner look messy and maybe add some swirls/doodles in its place. Secondly, try lowering the | |
61 | psd/saturation on the girls, they look burnt. Thirdly, the font color for the word "love" almost vanishes with the | |
62 | color of the sky, so try using a different color, perhaps red. Lastly, always put your watermark. | |
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66 | • Score: 8/10 | |
67 | Reason: -2 for disorganization | |
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