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| 1 | THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 1 | |
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| 5 | DESIGNER : TheFashionPixie | |
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| 7 | COVER : http://i.imgur.com/Q1PmupO.jpg | |
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| 14 | ( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 1 ) @tropicolds : | |
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| 17 | • Things I like: | |
| 18 | The colours, the placements, the text (but not entirely). | |
| 19 | I like your use of negative space, it guides the viewer's attention towards the model and the objects around it. | |
| 20 | The contrasts are beautiful, I love the purple-orange combo. The subtitles are placed well, they create symmetry. | |
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| 23 | • Things I dislike: | |
| 24 | The font used for title is good, but it looks weak compared to the rest of the cover, which is more "explosive". | |
| 25 | And it's a bit hard to read if it's in a thumbnail, for example. | |
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| 28 | • For improvement: | |
| 29 | For title, I suggest using a combination of the sans serif font used in subtitles and a bold script font | |
| 30 | like (Noelan, Stylish Calligraphy). "Blacksmith" could be written in a script font, and the rest in sans serif. | |
| 31 | But it's just an opinion. | |
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| 34 | - | • Score: 9,5/10 |
| 34 | + | • Score: 9.5/10 |
| 35 | Reason: -0.5 for text | |
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| 43 | ( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 2 ) @impassively : | |
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| 46 | • Things I like: | |
| 47 | I love pretty much everything about this cover. The subtle background, the textures, the sparkles, the objects, plants, | |
| 48 | the butterflies, the cutting of the model, and the colors. the font is really good too! the coloring is really beautiful. | |
| 49 | I love the purple vs yellow look. | |
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| 52 | • Things I dislike: | |
| 53 | There isn't much I dislike about this. All I could say is, the title looks a little plain because it's only white. | |
| 54 | The girl looks slightly over-saturated, but it's not too bad. The watermark is a little stark, | |
| 55 | maybe reduce the opacity or change it so it's not exactly white but like the off-white of something at the top. | |
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| 58 | • For improvement: | |
| 59 | The subtitles could be broken up into two, remove the align-left/right so you can move them around to be more flexible. | |
| 60 | Like maybe "there is more than" could curve around the thing at the top and "meets the eyes" could kind of curve between | |
| 61 | the butterfly and the plant there. ask me if that didn't make sense, haha. | |
| 62 | The title could have a text style- like the author does, but subtle. | |
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| 65 | • Score: 9/10 | |
| 66 | Reason: deduction for text | |
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