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  2. THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 1
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  6. DESIGNER : toobigofadreamer
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  8. COVER : https://68.media.tumblr.com/0cd3760b38327cad14342626c1d1d892/tumblr_osxa0sPkDr1vp23qno1_400.png
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  14. ( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 1 ) @tropicolds :
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  17. • Things I like:
  18. Placements (with a few drawbacks, listed in the section below), title, overall mood.
  19. I see you "sliced" the graphic in two halves, and put the title text in the middle.
  20. It is a good thing, since it creates a balance. The fonts chosen are nice, a script one definitely suits
  21. a romance novel and the colour is alright, it makes the text stand out and easy to read.
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  24. • Things I dislike:
  25. Placements (again, ik), blending. I believe it would look better if you switched the places of the two pictures -
  26. put the close-up at the bottom, and the other one on top. I'm saying this because the close-up looks "heavier"
  27. and it would provide a good "base", instead of floating. Also, it has rough margins.
  28. Your watermark is too big and the author's name is too small.
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  31. • For improvement:
  32. I suggest making the author's name the same width as the title (grids are helpful for this one)
  33. and make the watermark smaller, or if not, lower the opacity.
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  36. • Score: 8/10
  37. Reason: -1 point for text, -0.5 for placement, -0.5 for blending
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  45. ( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 2 ) @impassively :
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  48. • Things I like:
  49. I like the "movie poster" look you were going for with the blending of the couple on top.
  50. I also like the placement of the text. The pop of red on the top is very pretty as well.
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  54. • Things I dislike:
  55. While the red looks good, it looks awkward because it's only on the top and doesn't blend super well into the rest of the cover.
  56. The title looks a bit squished horizontally which is not a good look, and your watermark is more noticeable than the author.
  57. The font for the watermark and author is a little odd.
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  60. • For improvement:
  61. I think trying to blend in the top couple more would work, as well as adjusting their color to the rest or vice versa.
  62. The font could be expanded a bit, or use another script font. For the watermark, I think you should lower the opacity
  63. and move it below the author so it's less noticeable, but visible. The font could be changed to a simple sans serif font
  64. like arial or helvetica.
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  68. • Score: 7/10
  69. Reason: deduction for font and blending
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