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                                              THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 1


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DESIGNER : petrichora-

COVER : http://i.imgur.com/KA5GjLk.jpg
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( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 1 ) @tropicolds :


• Things I like:
The placements. It's not messy, but it doesn't catch my attention either. It's a simple graphic.


• Things I dislike:
Colouring and font. The coloring makes everything dull, and the models look orange, like they were sunburnt.
The font used for 'Storm' is not too aesthetically pleasing, it could've been better.
Overall, the graphic doesn't suggest any mood, it's plain.


• For improvement:
If you want to go for muted colours, choose a colouring psd which is skin-friendly and keeps its natural tone.
Change the font for 'Storm' and try to add more things.


• Score: 8/10
Reason: deduction for colouring, font, mood & lack of effort


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( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 2 ) @impassively :


• Things I like:
I love the color scheme and the blending! the font effects are really nice,
as well as the topaz filter on the whole graphic.


• Things I dislike:
I generally see your watermark on graphics but for this one there isn't. Rhe author is a little too close to the edge.
The S in "storm" looks a bit awkward.

• For improvement:
Add your watermark, always. Maybe move up the author a bit.
A good thing to do is to move the whole thing down, fill the top with that grey, and put the author there.
Maybe change the S to the same font as the rest of "storm" for uniformity, so it connects in flow.


• Score: 9/10
Reason: deduction for placement and text


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