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  2. THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 2
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  7. DESIGNER : paperinks
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  9. COVER : http://i.imgur.com/Akeggzk.jpg
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  15. CRITIQUE FROM @impassively :
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  18. • Things I like: Typography, composition, and color.
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  22. • Things I dislike: Image quality, some blending.
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  26. • For improvement: Some of the blending looks too soft, like the guy meeting the lockers and the girl's head
  27. has an orange glow to it. The quality of many things in the banner is pretty low- the b/w girl is low in quality for example,
  28. and the text looks pixellated. This contrasts with the leaves and flowers which are tiny bit higher quality, but still low.
  29. The watermark is placed oddly- i'd recommend making it smaller and putting it somewhere else.
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  33. • Score: 6/10
  34. Reason: -2 for blending, -2 for quality
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  43. CRITIQUE FROM @HiItsMeRT :
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  46. • Things I like: The font and the locker bg you used are a good choice.
  47. I also like the color scheme - how the banner looks very colorful but at the same time also has touch of black and white.
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  51. • Things I dislike: The poor quality pngs you used. The window looks out of place and the overall
  52. arrangement of everything looks weird. The leaf png at the top, has a very sharp edge on its right,
  53. which should have been hidden. The png of the girl on the right is too small compared to the other two,
  54. which draws very less focus on her. The font color is very highlighting.
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  58. • For improvement: First of all, always use high quality pngs, if you dont have it, then cut out from hd pictures, but dont
  59. use tiny/unclear ones. Secondly, you can remove the window and put sth like school stationary/doodles/swirls in its place.
  60. Thirdly, maybe for the font color it will look better with white than orange, just try to use subtle colors.
  61. Lastly. for the stock pngs like the leaf/flower, try using the realistic ones. I have some links below:
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  63. http://black-b-o-x.deviantart.com/art/Ivy-2-308685358
  64. http://lilith-trash.deviantart.com/art/Pngpack-100-661162313
  65. http://maureenolder.deviantart.com/art/STOCK-PNG-leaf-scatter-138185202
  66. http://foxy159200.deviantart.com/art/20-Pngs-Pack-619718637
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  70. • Score: 7/10
  71. Reason: -2 for the quality, -1 for arrangement
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