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  1. THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 1
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  6. DESIGNER : sIoans
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  8. COVER : http://i.imgur.com/p80rOMw.png
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  15. ( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 1 ) @tropicolds :
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  18. • Things I like:
  19. Placements, colouring. This is a very nice texture-based cover.
  20. I like how you chose a plain background and used a few brushes to bring the model in the centre of attention.
  21. I love the effects used for title, and the purple-orange contrast makes the cover less ordinary.
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  24. • Things I dislike:
  25. The watermark, some effects. The signature is in a totally different font and it draws attention unnecessarily.
  26. I also don't like the association of lens flare and grunge texture, they are opposites for me.
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  29. • For improvement:
  30. change the font of your watermark, and might look better if you remove the grunge texture.
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  33. • Score: 9/10
  34. Reason: -0.5 font, -0.5 texture
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  42. ( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 2 ) @impassively :
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  45. • Things I like:
  46. This is stunning. The textures are beautifully used and the effect you did with two halves is nice.
  47. The light flare is beautiful and really caught my eye.
  48. The left eye is so beautiful, the way you brought out the *shine* (see what i did there).
  49. The colors and the psd are really good together.
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  52. • Things I dislike:
  53. The red in the text while beautiful in the title, is a bit hard to read the author.
  54. The right eye looks blurrier than the left, but it could be due to the grid texture over it.
  55. The watermark is a little too visible.
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  58. • For improvement:
  59. Maybe change the author so it's just all white, or make the red brighter.
  60. If the watermark is bolded, unbold it or lower the opacity of it.
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  63. • Score: 9.5/10
  64. Reason: deduction for text
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