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                                              THE GRAPHIC GAMES : ROUND 1


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DESIGNER : rancorr

COVER : http://i.imgur.com/xqgzs3V.jpg

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( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 1 ) @tropicolds :


• Things I like:
Almost everything, to be honest. The model is the focus of this piece, well placed, the text is also well placed.
The colours are on point and the texture is pretty.


• Things I dislike:
The title is slightly hard to read, as it blends with the model's skin. It is not a bad thing, it's a style too,
but it could've been better. The use of texture is good, however the idea doesn't look finished, as if you were in
a hurry to finish the cover and send it to us.



• For improvement:
To make the text better-looking, I suggest applying a black gradient at the bottom and put the font on the black part,
so it'd be white on black, easier to read. Also, you could play more with textures and see how it turns out.


• Score: 9/10
Reason: -0.5 for text, -0.5 for texture


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( CRITIQUE FROM JUDGE 2 ) @impassively :


• Things I like:
I like the look you went for, the textures you used, and the background.


• Things I dislike:
The first thing I noticed was how low-quality the image of the girl is and how awkward one texture looks on top of her.
It's the one that has some blue on her hair on the right, by the way. The subtitle looks a bit weird.
The font you used for the title is typically a rarely used font, and should be avoided because of all the extra curls it has.
Though, the font for "the" and the author is fine. I don't like how "rhea" is bigger than "written by".

• For improvement:
Use HD pictures/png. The one texture I mentioned should be erased off of her hair and collarbone.
The subtitle could have some letter-spacing to widen it and maybe use a sans serif font so it's easier on the eyes.
I'm not really sure about the title font- maybe try a font like audrey.
I'd recommend changing "rhea" to be the same size as "written by" or moved under "written by".
Also, add your watermark, just in case.

• Score: 5/10
Reason: deduction for poor quality and fonts


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